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Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts

Thursday, 29 November 2018

Language Features



WALT: Poetry.  We are learning about the language features that are present in poetry.
 

Wednesday, 26 September 2018

Sorting Out Brainstorms


Walt: Write and sort words from our brainstorms
 This is my brainstorm and my brainstorm is about our school cross country. The brainstorm includes how I felt, the goals you were aiming, how you prepared and what you were doing in the race. It has some feelings that  are like satisfied, some of it is painful to feel. So that is my brainstorm on my school cross country.

Monday, 10 September 2018

About Paula Green


Today we are learning  about Paula green the a New Zealand poet , she makes poems for adults and children to read. She is 68 years old right now, some of her hobbies are cooking, watching movies also riding bikes. I think she is a very good poet and she makes very good poems. 

Friday, 7 September 2018

The Tongan Group Dance For Tongan Language Week

Today we had our Tongan language week assembly, I was in the Tongan group dance for the seniors girls and we danced to a song called Angi taulua . The boys did a kaka and they used sticks in the kaka, they were awesome and the girls were very good too. 

Thursday, 30 August 2018

Roses are red Violets are blue Poem

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Team 5 rocks what about you?

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Come to pt england we will love you
Don’t worry we don’t bite because we are here to make things right

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Come to pt england and you’ll have the best teachers too

With the help of Tatiana

Thursday, 23 August 2018

My Hunger Of Food

              


 




          They looked at me with eyes hungry as sin. 
They all ate my starving eyes, and they hungrily swallowed me all. Yummy that was so good! I want to have it again.


Wednesday, 22 August 2018

WALT Read Fluently

We are learning to read fluently. We have spent time looking at phrasing - how we say words together. Having expression in our voices is important too!

Listen to audio recording. We did this to practice fluency and to hear ourselves.

I think I sounded like I wasn't fluent  because I feel like I  didn't have any expression in my voice. I’m good at using an different charter that cause I try and put expression in my voice. I need to work on my timing because I kept on making mistakes.  



Tuesday, 14 August 2018

Teachers Strike




This Wednesday all the  New Zealand teachers are going on strike.  One reason why they are going on strike is the need more  time to teach the students .They have in their classes Because they spend a lot of  time doing the student’s assessment but doesn't have time to teach. These things are very good but it’s hard for one teacher with thirty kids.

The second thing that the teachers want is more resources for  additional needs to help the students that need help. Because when the students doesn't have enough resources than what are we gonna do to help them?.  And the school’s need more teachers because one teacher can’t take care of thirty student’s.

The last thing that the teachers want is to have better pay because they always stay more than how long they have to stay at school for. Also to because they do two things at a time because they do teach and they write their reports to give to the students parents. So thats all of the reasons why all the teachers in New Zealand are on strike. Also Dliz and I agree with the teachers because they have good reasons why. We wish the teachers good luck.   

Friday, 10 August 2018

Ned Kindness Adventure Show 2018

Today on the 6th of August we had someone from kindness adventure came to show us some ways to be kind.

Cosmo and Ned were talking about how being different can be good by trying new things that you don't really like but when you try new things you are introducing yourself to new things that you’ve new been around. So it’s always good to be different.

Another think that Cosmo and Ned were talking about was that being kind is cool because when you are kind to other people you are showing other people how to be kind. Also you are showing them how kind you are to everyone when you are being kind.They were encouraging us to always be kind and no matter what just be nice and kind to them.


The third thing that Cosmo and Ned were talking about was to be a person that includes everyone in the group. Including others is about when someone is alone go and ask then if they want to join you and your friends. That also means that  you should always be a kind and caring person.

So that's the things that Cosmo and Ned were talking about and they were very nice and entertaining to watch act out the things they did in Kenya with the students in Kenya and in Kenya they don't even have clean water like we do so they were selling treasure from Kenya and who every buys one of the treasures the money will go to Kenya to make wiles for them to have clean water to drink, clean there close and to clean themselves.

So that's what they were talking about when they came to pt england school.